On a sunny Sunday, my aunt, cousins and I went to watch a movie at Sylvia Park Cinema. When we got there we waited for one hour because we were so early for our movie time. While waiting, we went to a store for games. The shop attendant allowed us to play a basketball game where in we had to shoot the ball inside the net and we win a prize. Of a PS4 if we scored 34 shots in 2 minutes. Immanuel only scored 26 so he did not win the PS4. Instead, he got a Samsung 6 cell phone. He was happy even though he really wanted the ps4.
Then, a man in a suit announced that our movie was starting in 6 minutes. We hurriedly walked out of the shop where our aunty was waiting for us. We asked money from her so we could buy lego blocks before we go inside the movie theater. She bought us 2 boxes of lego blocks and that made us all very happy.
On our way to the theater, we stopped by at the cashier to claim our free popcorn and drinks. I had L&P and my cousins had coke and Sprite. There was a long queue of people wanting to watch Ice Age Collision Course. I can't wait to watch it!
Finally, the movie started and we also started eating our popcorn and drinking our drinks. While the movie was on I was thinking of my family especially my baby sister because my mum and her were at home on their own. When my popcorn was finished I went out to buy for more. Luckily, they serve fast there so I went back in right away because i did not want to miss good parts of the movie...
When the movie ended, we went to do some shopping to buy clothes and shoes for my aunty, cousins and myself. While shopping, we also talked about how we really enjoyed the movie. Then, we focused on our shopping and we decided on what to buy. We bought shoes like Nike, Puma and Adidas shoes and we also bought shirts from the same store.
When we were done, our aunty took us all home. Then, we played a game called of duty black ops 2. It was all about the army shooting the bad guys. A while later we had dinner of KFC, okra, fried rice, chicken wings and chop suey. After dinner we went back to our room and played different games like Gta 5, black ops 2 and 1, world war 2, minecraft, Gran turismo 6, need for speed and Ps4. Eventually, we all felt tired so we all went to bed and said, “goodnight to each other!”
My favourite part is when we went shopping because we bought some shirt and shoes.
Learning intention: We are learning to write a recount using appropriate language features.
Success criteria: I know I can do this when I use punctuations correctly to show the beginning and end of sentences.
I like the way you described bad violent games aswell.
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